Comments on: Paladin Exclusive: Revised Chapter 1

By: Sally Slater

Sally Slater — Tue, 12 Feb 2013 00:24:39 +0000

They’re haaaaard. But I’m glad you liked it! I’ve decided I hate first chapters.

By: Sally Slater

Sally Slater — Tue, 12 Feb 2013 00:24:09 +0000

Mwahaha, now I know your real name!

By: Jade Wilson

Jade Wilson — Mon, 11 Feb 2013 14:13:52 +0000

And you say you’re not good at writing fight scenes! Pah! Really enjoyable!

By: N, Shimobi-Obijuru

N, Shimobi-Obijuru — Mon, 11 Feb 2013 13:50:05 +0000

Alright, then. Also, I noticed that in this version, “Sam” is a new name. Which one did she use when training under Sir Daniel (assuming that she still has)? Did he know her real identity and teach her despite it?

By: Maryam

Maryam — Mon, 11 Feb 2013 05:51:52 +0000

I love it! I mean, I loved the originals too but being a fan of battle scenes I'll admit to liking this chapter better xD

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By: Sally Slater

Sally Slater — Mon, 11 Feb 2013 01:03:08 +0000

The way I have it now, it’s more of a remembrance vs. a flashback and it’s briefer – in the second chapter of the story.

By: Sally Slater

Sally Slater — Mon, 11 Feb 2013 01:01:46 +0000

Whew! I’m glad you like it. I hate first chapters.

By: N, Shimobi-Obijuru

N, Shimobi-Obijuru — Mon, 11 Feb 2013 00:16:24 +0000

This was marvelous! 😀 I like this new start: exciting, but still informative. I did like hearing about how Tristan saved Sam, though; hopefully, it will remain a part of the book?

By: Erin Hines

Erin Hines — Sun, 10 Feb 2013 23:40:30 +0000

I love it! It made me chuckle when William caused himself to bleed over his own clumsiness. ^^