Comments on: Obsessive Writing Compulsion (Paladin Rewrite Update)

By: Shelbe

Shelbe — Thu, 26 Feb 2015 19:42:26 +0000

This is why I love rewrites. Lots more to learn about, and, sure, it may be different than the story I’m used to but I;m so excited to see it! Wish I could pre-prder, but alas this broke college girl has no more money to spare at the moment. I cannot wait to read the official book! Good luck!!

By: Sarah Cline

Sarah Cline — Wed, 14 May 2014 00:27:49 +0000

You are one of my favorite authors, so your reply absolutely made my day. It feels like seeing your favorite movie star on the street and striking up a conversation. You are entirely welcome for the comment!

Since commenting, I read the book again (yes, I am aware that I have a problem) and noticed that you actually do continue the theme of not being able to control what you were born. I guess I just missed it the first time around!

Every time I get a notification on Wattpad I hope that it is an update to the restricted stories. It is my guilty pleasure! I guess once you fall in love with characters you just can't get enough of them.

By: Sally Slater

Sally Slater — Thu, 08 May 2014 22:25:58 +0000

Hey Sarah – thanks so much for the lovely comment! I must confess to slacking a bit on my rewrite (about halfway through), but I’ve gotten the writing itch again which is good news for me (and for Braeden and Sam).

I’ll see what I can do about my smutty stories…

By: Sarah Cline

Sarah Cline — Thu, 08 May 2014 21:41:29 +0000

Also, are you going to be updating the Untold Restricted Stories any time soon?

By: Sarah Cline

Sarah Cline — Thu, 08 May 2014 21:37:25 +0000

I can’t wait for the rewrite! I really want more Sam and Braeden. I love them together, and I feel like their relationship could be fleshed out more and go deeper. I want to be yelling at them to get together while crying because they love each other and they are so perfect. In the beginning there was emphasis on Sam connecting with Braeden because they are both struggling with who they are and who they were born as. I didn’t see as much later on, but I think you should continue that theme. Maybe that’s for the second book though!

By: Ro McMaster

Ro McMaster — Mon, 02 Dec 2013 00:15:27 +0000

I (and I’m sure many others) have complete faith in your ability to create wonderful entertaining works. I look forward to devouring this next book of yours.Trust in your gift to please others- its worked so far-hasn’t it?
Ro…

By: Sally Slater

Sally Slater — Mon, 28 Oct 2013 19:41:53 +0000

Ha, we’ll see. They’ll definitely be a lot more battle scenes in the sequel. Probably not so much in this first one.

By: theEpic Creeper

theEpic Creeper — Mon, 28 Oct 2013 06:55:31 +0000

cant wait for the rewright, i loved the book. If you could ad in some more battle scenes that would be cool. if u dont i wont care, the book will always be awesome

By: Sally Slater

Sally Slater — Fri, 25 Oct 2013 19:43:55 +0000

Yes, this version will definitely be much bigger, and longer, and hopefully better! I do feel like my writing is getting stronger...hopefully the plot is too!

Thanks for the well wishes!

By: Weylinne

Weylinne — Thu, 24 Oct 2013 18:35:12 +0000

I think it would be absolutely great!.
Your writing style was already really good in the wattpad version.
Nice and clean and a easy read.
I always hoped you would rewrite it into a bigger version.
It can never be a bad thing to improve your book and your writing.
Means that for us there is more to read!
More to learn about every character and so on.
I’m really looking forward to it!
In the mean time i’ll keep re-reading the wattpad version!

Goodluck and keep going!!
Paladin is one of the most exiting stories i’ve read in awhile.